亚洲城考研英语40篇大作文演练与点评第10篇,名师王文轲

  10 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which
you should:

  2005

  1. describe the drawing,

  Part B

  2. interpret its meaning, and

  52. Directions:

  3. make your comment.

  Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In
your essay ,you should first describe the drawing the interpret its
meaning, and give your comment on it.

  You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

  You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20 points)

  该文可分为三段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段指出该图所揭示的社会现象。第三段是一个高度浓缩的段落,可以将原因分析和解决办法结合起来。In
the picture, an old woman in shabby clothes says to her son in the car:
“I havent received support payments from you for more than a year.” The
son responds: “Mom, dont you see that we have just bought a car?”
Sitting besides him is his fat wife holding a pet dog.

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  This phenomenon is not the least uncommon in todays society.
Parents devote all their money, time and energy into bringing up their
children—they are willing to do everything for their children. But as
for the children, many of them take parents love and sacrifice for
granted. When they grow up, they will have their own jobs and their own
families, and some of them will find all kinds of excuses not to support
their old parents.

  The picture above symbolically demonstrates how three sons and a
daughter treat their old and helpless father. They each stand in a
different comer of a football field. The eldest son kicks out the father
while the other children are prepared to ward him off. It is sad to see
none of them is willing to receive and support their father. What it
illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society: many grown-up
children refuse to support their aging parents.

亚洲城,  In my belief, this unfavorable phenomenon signals the failure of
both school and family education. When some teachers are concentrating
on the performance of children in local, provincial and national
examinations, how can students learn practical skills, responsibility
and gratitude? Parents should let the children get in touch with the
society step by step from a very young age—sending them to study in a
different city is a good choice. Independent life will help them know
the hardship that parents have been through—in this case they are more
likely to make full preparations for the harsh competitions ahead and
stand up to lifes challenges upon graduation. Only in the way can their
education be meaningful and the above annoying scene be
avoided.第一段对图画进行了描述,其中support
payments指“赡养费”。第二段的首句是统领句,语气很强,说明该现象的普遍性。而后分父母与子女两方面来描述当前的现状。注意第二句中破折号的用法。末句中的support指赡养。“付赡养费”可用pay
support,所以该句最后可写作“…not to pay support for their old parents”。

  While young people enjoy a comfortable life, their parents are
neglected and left in utter poverty, as these elderly people have grown
so physically weak that they no longer have the power to support
themselves. I think these children have gone against their own
conscience and therefore may be put under strong attacks of words and
contempt by us. According to Chinese culture, to respect the old and
love the young are the traditional virtue and to be kind to one’s
parents is the height of it. We owe so much to our parents in the they
not only gave us life but have done much in bringing us up. It is
against nature for us to escape from our responsibility of taking care
of our parents when they are old.

  第三段第一句一针见血地指出了该现象的原因是学校和家庭教育的双重失败。而后先说教师,如果他们专注于学生在各种考试中的表现,又怎能教会他们实用的技能、责任感和感恩呢?该句后半部分是反问句,效果很强烈。同时兼有提示正确做法的作用——学校应重点教会学生能力、责任感和感恩。第三句讲父母应让孩子从很小的时候就开始逐步接触社会。第四句讲独立生活能让他们了解父母曾经经历的苦难,这样他们就更可能对未来的激烈竞争做好准备,并在毕业时能勇敢面对人生的挑战。最后一句是倒装句做结语,语气很强:只有这样教育才会有意义,上面的场景才能避免。一幅图画描述的是单一的场景,可是它反映的却是社会现象或人生哲理。所以我们首先应将该现象或哲理进行准确描述,而后对其进行分析。

  On the contrary, we have the duty to pay back their love by making
their later years enjoyable and happy. With love and respect for the
old, our society will be full of sunshine; Without love and respect for
the old, our society will be dark through.

  分析的最高境界是“深入浅出”。分析中包含原因与办法很常见,在这里将两者整合却是一种难度较大的做法。这样做可以避免重复,用简洁的话语表达复杂的含义。

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